up in the sky,a shining star..
seeming so distant,seeming afar..
throwing its aura down upon me..
its silhouette surrounds the sky bizarre..
its rays penetrate deep in my soul..
i'm tempted to touch and have it all..
it whispers a story unsaid to the world..
i can hear its voice,it gives me a call..
endeavoring to leap up n touch the sky..
i crave for wings for i wanna fly..
life directs me to reach out to it..
impossible it is..i fret and i cry..
i now fall flat and face the reality..
a mortal i am,no angel in disguise..
constraints and incapabilities bound me back..
disappointed,defeated..i pay the price..
sitting by the window staring into horizon..
i wonder about my shining little star..
my heart aches when it realizes the truth..
it needs me no more,we are too far..
seeming so distant,seeming afar..
throwing its aura down upon me..
its silhouette surrounds the sky bizarre..
its rays penetrate deep in my soul..
i'm tempted to touch and have it all..
it whispers a story unsaid to the world..
i can hear its voice,it gives me a call..
endeavoring to leap up n touch the sky..
i crave for wings for i wanna fly..
life directs me to reach out to it..
impossible it is..i fret and i cry..
i now fall flat and face the reality..
a mortal i am,no angel in disguise..
constraints and incapabilities bound me back..
disappointed,defeated..i pay the price..
sitting by the window staring into horizon..
i wonder about my shining little star..
my heart aches when it realizes the truth..
it needs me no more,we are too far..
8 comments:
the best piece of writing i have read in a while!
pure feelings in the simplest of form!
awesome!
like i said before ....
reach out for the star.....maybe its shining just for u!!
n u r an angel....disguised.....dun take that away from ur ownself!!
waiting for more from u lady!!
love reading what u write!!
u can very well inspire me too :)
cheeeers
mwaaaah
Thanks for writing this for we bloggers Sonam.. youve made a point by mentioning the goals you aspire are so unachievable and is the harshest of the realities. The flow has been nice the ending was too good. In the middle you may have done better but thats where you learn and write more and more. I would look for more such posts from you. Overall a touching creation and we all hope we get to where we belong :)lv u ..
True feelings.....
nt, to worry.....
very well written....
Up in the sky, a shining star
Seeming so distant, seeming afar
Throwing its aura down upon me
Its silhouette surrounds the sky bizarre
As it shines down on me
Spreading a light so heavenly
I look at it and smile
I just wanna be with it for a while
As I stare at it
Its white blind light,
Envelops me
All I see, is just a fantasy
I long for wings so that I could fly
Wanna reach out for it, wanna touch the sky
I jump out of the window, I wanna get closer
And fall on the ground, as always a loser
Broken and shattered, I face the reality
The star shines down, but not on me
I wanna run, I wanna flee
I wanna hide, the light hurts me
Just can’t escape, can’t break free.
The star still shines bright
It still scatters its heavenly light
Its distant, its afar
It smiles at me
It makes me live a fantasy
Sitting by the window staring into horizon
I wonder about my shining little star
My heart aches when it realizes the truth
It never needed me, we are too far.
hey thanks for visiting my blog (can be called the "ex-blog" considering the activity in the last 7 months)!
u haven't written anything too in a long time...longer than i have been off mine.
gr8 wrdz,,
nyc flow/rhythm..
n oh.!!!so true..
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